写作文语法错误

还是说他俩都好， 要他两都好的话， 用on the other hand.最后， most people will have benefits from the new festival system. most 后面不用加of, benefits 不是bennefit, 好处是用加s， 不是就一个好处。总体来说， 语法错误很多， 多多练习， 我可以帮你改。

多背诵写作常用句型，自己写的时候，即使话题不一样，很多句型都是可以套用上的，换换其中几个单词就是了 下面我搜集的资料送给你，希望对你的写作提高有所帮助！高考作文经典句型100句 1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.在这个迅速发展的世界里...

语法错误一般扣分比较厉害，因为它是写作的基础，没有语法就不能很好地表达思想。除了语法分，还有其他衡量标准，包括句式的美观和逻辑关系。但语法扣分有个上线，不会因为语法错误把分数都扣掉，如果字数80以上，13处语法要扣掉总分数的一半。

个人觉得可能有两个地方不太合适：They could spend less time on TV or computer;这句我觉的应该用should,你想表达的是否是他们应该少花点时间在电视和电脑上，但原句意思是他们可以少花点时间在电视和电脑上。I think the third part is 这里，前边你可能已经说了两点，但这里直接说第三部分就会...

Thursday April 12th rainy Today is(改为was) really too bad!When I opened an umbrella,Ifound my purse is(改为was) missing.there was (改为were)some money and(去掉and) my photos and so on in the purse.I looked for it everywhere,but still can't found(改为couldn't find...

同时现在完成时是指过去发生的事情持续到现在或者对现在任由影响的。这里用感觉有点小别扭，不过我个人觉得没错吧- -因为如果要改我觉得过去式可能更不合适。改：a journey that full of risks has happended in the hole 我就看出这么多啦，不过初一作文能写成这样不错啦~~想当年偶初一英语作文可是...

有些地方有点小小的漏词，有些句子也有重复。所以我帮你改了点点，拿掉重复的句子，希望对你又帮助。Thins I don't like I'm a student, I've got some hobbies and somethings that I don't like. The things I don't like the most is basketball. Many student likes to play it, but...

第一句。From the line graph , we can see clearly that the acid levels in mouth after eating three different kinds of sugar or honey each 5 minutes .[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[句子错误] 语法错误，建议将three different kinds改为three kinds。[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词...

多练习 pronoun。noun。adverb。adjective。verb等，把 grammar 分开学

too. If you want to reduce mind gap with your daughter. I have a good advice which(that改成which从句) is to become her friend.In conclusion, best wishes to you and your daughter.我只把语法改了。在用词上和其他方面有很多不够准确的，所以作文读上去会很别扭。若有疑问欢迎追问。